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What Preston needed was a Christmas miracle. Was his boss's offer of a marriage of convenience heaven-sent or was Preston making a deal with the devil?Words: 42,004 COMPLETE...

Title : husband for the holidays
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ISBN : 17279287
Format Type : online fiction
Number of Pages : 126 Pages
Status : Available For Download
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husband for the holidays Reviews

  • Ami
    2019-05-26 07:18

    3.25 starsPreston McCall works as a server at Carter Jameson's gay club. A tragedy takes the life of Preston's brother and wife and leaves him with their 9-months old twin babies. When Preston comes to see Carter to give his resignation -- he cannot work as a server at a gay bar, the social worker threats to take the babies away from him -- Carter proposes a temporary solution. Marry him...------------------------------Ahhhh, one of the classic Harlequin themes with gay characters: older successful businessman, a more 'innocent-like' younger man, a proposition of marriage of convenience, aaaand babies ^^. Yep, color me intrigued!!!In length, it's longer than the first of Project Amy's story I read, Shawn's Voice. Unfortunately, since it's longer, I notice more editing issues too. No matter though, the story is cute. The chapters where Preston and Carter deal with the babies are the highlight for me. Those chapters are fluffy and adorable. I can't help it, I love reading men with babies *siiiiigh*.I do find the plot with Carter's mom to be introduced and solved in such a rush. And emotion-wise, I think Shawn's Voice is way more emotional. But still, if you're looking for cute story with babies, this might be a good option. And it's free -- just ignore the editing issues.

  • Adriana
    2019-05-05 11:26

    3.5This is a mix between M/M Harlequin and a Hallmark Christmas Movie, a cute free story about a convenience marriage between boss and employee.Warning: some editing and grammar issues, so keep away if that bothers you.

  • Heller
    2019-05-07 11:18

    Pretty damn good for a free story.

  • Deeze
    2019-04-30 09:32

    A lovely sweet little read. As the author stated, she was was in a Hallmark Christmas movies mood LOL.Preston and Carter enter a Marrige of Convinience (aka Mills and Boon), and we get to join them on their journey to realising they no longer want a fake marrige.Ideal for a december read to get you in the festive mood. You do need to over look quite a few errors in the writing, but not enough to spoil the story.

  • Camille
    2019-04-26 07:07

    2.8A truly ridiculous amount of errors: ESL issues, missing words, carelessness etc.This is a little too cutesy in some places and formulaic as well.Nonetheless, this Cinderfella story was okay underneath it all.

  • Idamus
    2019-04-29 12:27

    Cuteish story, too many babies, not really my thing, and desperately in need of a BETA

  • My Dichotomy Life
    2019-05-11 09:11

    What a wonderful find:-D This is a great short story on a fan fiction website and a potentially good author to watch out for. Sweet story about how a young man copes when he suddenly becomes the guardian of his 9 month old twin nephews. His Boss helps out in an unexpected way..... https://m.fictionpress.com/s/3083402/1/The two MC's are great! After a moment, Carter glanced down at him, brow creasing slightly. "What are you doing? Are you cuddling? Is this cuddling?""Yes. Now shut up. You're ruining it."

  • Shahreen
    2019-05-21 08:29

    4.5 stars

  • Aera
    2019-05-21 08:35

    Author does a good job, about keeping you guessing about why people have certain hangups and why the people can't just be together, and it's hinted at that there are reasons other than "I just don't think it will work" reasons. Sooooo....didn't totally fall in love in with either character. I think overall well written and tied up loose ends pretty well. I didn't feel it was abrupt or the way people changed was completely deus ex or something. It was definitely a story that was about two people that had initial attraction and how they ended up together. I am pretty pleased the author did not make the main character seem, ummm....weak and in need of extreme help? Even though the circumstances and how initially he seems to just go with the flow. Both characters become fleshed out and the characterization is nice without there being an informational dump to describe their personalities or quirks. Overall worth the read. Loved it.

  • Chris, the Dalek King
    2019-05-11 12:35

    This was interesting, and for the most part I enjoyed it, but when the whole 'I know he was an asshole and a complete jerk, but can't you see how it is all your fault' thing happened, I just found myself wanting to stop reading. I did end up reading the end, since it was only one more chapter, but it was more to just wrap the story up than really caring what happened.

  • qx
    2019-05-24 14:31

    2.5

  • Lisa Foulke
    2019-05-08 06:30

    A guy's boss offers to marry him so he can keep custody of his nephews. They fall in love but don't tell each other. Lots of miscommunication. Happy ending.

  • Dena
    2019-05-12 07:31

    3.5*

  • Marsha Spence
    2019-05-25 08:22

    Really enjoyed this!

  • Lily
    2019-05-20 13:25

    This sweet, entertaining story has a classic "Harlequin Romance" feel and despite the need for some more editing was an enjoyable read.

  • Sheilad37
    2019-05-03 13:09

    Cute short story

  • MaelleMaud
    2019-05-06 11:24

    Carter & Preston.A free short story with no writing correction obviously but the story was entertaining and the MC interesting. And it is free!